Saturday, May 24, 2014

Writing Contest Entry by Eve

Her eyes hold too much
for one so young.
There were dreams she could have dreamed.
Songs she could have sung.
A life that has been broken
when it has only begun.
She doesn't laugh or cry.
Why should she try?
She rather bottle it up inside.
She is the girl you see everyday.
Her eyes are full of fear
and you turn away.
Never to hear what she has to say.
Scarred,
 and Bruised.
Afraid,
 and Confused.
And we just pass her by
day by day,
never to hear what she has to say.



13 comments:

  1. That. Is. Awesome! Oh my goodness, that is so beautiful and poetic :) <3
    Thanks so much for entering! :) :) :)
    xo,
    -Anna <3

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  2. That was SOOOOOO pretty! I loved it. :D

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  3. Oh my goodness I can not even begin to say how great this is! Beautiful and thought provoking <3

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  4. Thank you all so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  5. Gorgeous writing, Eve, I loved reading this. ♥
    Tane ♥♥♥
    tangerinetane.blogspot.com

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  6. Amazing!!! Keep up the awesome work!! :)

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  7. Amazing!!! Keep up the awesome work!! :)

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  8. This is so incredibly beautiful! Loved it :)
    -Nymisha

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  9. I was wondering if you could re put the button about me challenge on your blog, cause i changed it, and you still have the old one on your side bar. So yeah, if you could just take it off, and put it back up again, that would be great! Thanks! :)

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